Hee, if you want to write up a detailed commentary, I certainly wouldn't object, but you seem to have lots of life things going on right now. If you ever get around to it, it's all good, but otherwise I can just pick your brains IRL sometime. ;)

And fair points. I appreciate the feedback, and it's looking like I'll poke at this more. And screw the viewing order and theory of continuity, apparently. :)